The harmonic elements in these songs are great, and perfectly suited to trance. I also liked the ending, how one instruments fades away after another, gradually over time.
Mixing wise and composition wise also, there is definitly room to improve. The song is lacking low-end altogether, which should be a key feature in a trance song, and in any EDM song in general. The drums could be more punchier, especially the snare. The synths, while they harmonically sound well, they are not well integrated within the mix.
I would normally give this a 2.5-star, ill up it by a half, knowing that this was made in a pretty basic software, and that you also made it in a very short amount of time. However, i REALLY recommend putting something more complex together, because you have potential, and you can certainly do it!
Keep it up!