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Very good!

From the animation to VA work, solid job! My fav was definitly the ending narrative section.

Keep it up!

THIS WAS AMAZING!

The amount of work that has been put into this is just amazing. Visuals and animations look smooth, VA-ing is amateur, sure, but DUDEEE, this is cool.

Keep it up!

my pp hurt

I think i just found the winner of LD46.

Perfect concept, perfect execution, this is indeed a fun a little game with ton of appeal.

Nice job. Keep it up!

OFFICIAL NGBSC REVIEW (upon request):

Composition wise, you have pretty decent ideas. The track has nicely structured melodies and crescendos that in themselves are suitable to picture a boss theme. I also like the occaional switches in keys and time signature, which help the track to flow naturally, without the entire composition going flat.

Production wise, it is lacking. Most of the instruments sound synthetic and artificial, and some of them are not balanced and loud enough (for example the drums and percussion).

Mastering and mixing wise, its OK, apart from the things mentioned in previously. For me, the drums and percussion were way too quiet, and the whole track was lacking dynamics, and loudness (especially at the crescendo's at 00:36 and 02:00). For this reason, the track loses a lot its energy, which is crucial, even more when you are making boss music.

Overall, your good ideas here are unfortunately paired with mediocre execution at best,preventing it from sounding even remotely close to something boss related. Even with the fluffy and silly allure this track is having, i think this could have worked to make a weird, but interesting boss theme. Having good ideas but no technical skills is still the better version (as opposed to having no good ideas at all), because production and mixing/mastering knowledge comes with experience.

With all being said, you are definitely on a good track, keep it up! :)

SCORES:

Composition: 7.5/10
Production: 6.5/10
Mixing/Mastering: 7/10
Accuracy: 8/15

My man 3manon! Its nice to hear your voice for the first time!

In the middle of NGADM listening praty as im writing this.

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(translation: perfect)

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